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    dots Submission Name: Faulse Realitydots

    Author: S.A.M.
    ASL Info:    26/f/xx
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 476/419/137
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is my life. If I had it my way I would read most of my life away. I did read my spring break away. Got up at 8:30 read all day, litterally, stayed up till 2:00 or 3:00 am and repeated it the next day. And so this is the story of my escape from reality.

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    dotsFaulse Realitydots

    Lost in the pages,
    to which I cling.
    My escape,
    the one companion,
    that will never doubt me.
    Living in fiction,
    worlds born of another's imagination.
    Dark times,
    magic and prophesy.
    Realms not reached,
    in true breath of life,
    From a small town,
    to New York,
    then on to another country.
    I could travel the world in days,
    reading words on dry pages,
    an unreality I won't accept,
    its real enough to me.
    But at the end of the day,
    when suddenly I'm home,
    all the memories come flooding back.
    Friendships that suffer,
    brokenhearts unfixable but by his love,
    a mothers curses,
    as her daily troubles,
    she takes out on me.
    In those moments,
    my heart begs to return,
    to its faulse reality.

    Submitted on 2005-04-01 20:55:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, awesome. all your poems are awesome. it's very sad, and i can relate to it in ways. when i read books, i forget who i am and all, and don't remember anything till i put the book down. i hate that. i like false realities, i think they're more interesting than real life. but that's coming from someone who daydreams 28/7. lol. good job, as usual.
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]
      this is very good, it reminds me a lot of myself, especially

    Lost in the pages,
    to which I cling.
    My escape,
    the one companion,
    that will never doubt me.

    I can definielty relate to this...Great work.

    | Posted on 2005-06-07 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      If I had the time to read the day away I would. This is exactally how I veiw going into other worlds through books. If I could live in a book I would. Sometimes I feel that I belong more in the book world than in the real world. I always forget my problems when I enter a book. This poem was great. I love these few lines the best: "Living in fiction,
    worlds born of another's imagination." and
    "I could travel the world in days,
    reading words on dry pages,
    an unreality I won't accept,
    its real enough to me."
    This is deffinately going on my fave list. Great job!
    | Posted on 2005-04-02 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this is very sad, not the poem itself, but- I hope you understand what I mean. Anyway, this was well written. There is nothing I believe you should change. Rock on.

    Not so steadily,
    Someone's crying angel
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by bloodwing | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this. The ending came to soon.
    I love to read and I have felt that same way many times when the book was over,..reality is harsh and cruel, who needs it when you have fiction?
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]

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