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  Submission Name: Invisible
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| Author: | shmuzzelle | | ASL Info: | 20/girl/canada
| | Elite Ratio: | 8 - 261/134/30 | | Words: | 127 |
| | | Class/Type: | Poetry/Death | | Total Views: | 299 | | Average Vote: | No vote yet. | | Bytes: | 868 |
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I wrote this back in January, but have been thinking about to post ever since. Everyone knew that Brian was suicidal, he tried a few times, and wrote about in a media class project. I guess that no one either noticed or cared enough to do anything about it. Mr. Poirier still feels guilty about it, it's something that he always thinks about what he should have done differently. I don't think that everyone has fully recovered from it, a lot of people still miss him. I remember when I got the phone call that I couldn't believe that it was him. I've been pretty depressed sometimes, and I had almost done what he did the one day. I hate thinking that that could have been me that time. I think that a lot of people forget that the family and friends are left behind to deal with the aftermath, including the lack of snesitivity to the issue. I hate how some people make the stupidest comments about that stuff. Anyway, this is what was floating around in my head, and I hope that someone can understand my thoughts.
Brian, we miss you.
December 29th, 2003 |
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Invisible
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His coat is sitting on the guard rail.
Traffic stopped, bright red lights
awakening the early morning.
No one comprehends
what has happened.
Sombre bodies return
walking the halls once more
barely feeling the gap
of an other one gone.
A victim to himself.
Few words were said,
an invisible gone.
A tiny world is broken.
A bigger one moves on.
Victims are the tiny world.
A year goes by,
the victim is forgotten.
The gap is slowly being filled,
but never to its entirety.
The memories are left behind.
He had the never to see the light,
leaving behind his darkness
for the rest of the world to carry.
The tiny world carries this burden
because it was not left a choice. |
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