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    dots Submission Name: love enduresdots

    Author: shockking
    ASL Info:    36/m/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 8/11/4
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Limerick/Comedy
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       a favorite, off the top of the head, no pun intended, one day. i came up with this last year and called it love endures. i was erikallenpoe at that time.

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    dotslove enduresdots

    There once was a man from Nantucket
    who kept his dear wife in a bucket
    by "wife", i mean head
    cause she's really quite dead
    that's the last time she'll say,
    "I won't suck it!"

    Submitted on 2005-04-03 23:10:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice twist to the 'Nantucket' stories. I always appreciate a good laugh. It's a good piece, though it could have been just a bit longer as I'm always one that likes a bit more depth to a story...lol. Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2005-05-01 00:00:00 | by SouthrnQT | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice change-up to a classic limerick. I've seen many "Nantucket" rhymes, but I will say this one's got what today's youth call "flava." It grabs the attention and drags one down to the Irish street level that this form of poetry calls home. I found myself reflecting on my "wife" which I as well keep in a bucket, and found this work to be universally relatable. Keep up the good work. In all actuallity, I enjoyed this piece, and hope to see more from you. Thanks for the read.
    His Assholiness-
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by His Assholiness | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...i really enjoyed this and i know they say this is not good critiquing but what can i say...
    f.cking funny...hehe
    now that's how you treat a lady...

    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]
      this was pretty funny. that's about it. this thing won't let me leave till i type some more . . . . so i'm just gonna copy and paste this again.
    this was pretty funny. that's about it. this thing won't let me leave till i type some more . . . . so i'm just gonna copy and paste this again.
    | Posted on 2005-04-03 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]

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