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    dots Submission Name: Nirvana Guydots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I wrote a poem about him before called Beautiful Suicide if you think that it is worth your time.


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    Man this is probably not worth reading but I have to talk about it...I guess journals are just not viewed enough.

    A guy I know is on life support because he overdosed pretty extreme...he prolly isn't going to make it from what the doctors say, he is only like 23 I would say and his liver is gone and shit...it seems ironic to me, he is the one who turned me on to Nirvana and Kurt Cobain and he fits the decription fairly well, long dirty blonde hair blue icy eyes, not to mention he plays like every Nirvana song out there but man it seems to me like he is trying to be him, I have loved him since I was in like 5th grade and I hate knowing that he may die and never know how I feel about him or that I even know that he exists and that he is beautiful to me...if he lives I will, I will tell him though I know that there is no future for us, at least then I will know.




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      Nirvana, a smile so bitterly beautiful. My favorite band, makes for a good play here and there too. An angst so beautiful, without being there you can't comprehend, ehnce i'd advise not going, but it be too hippocritical, as for your friend, tell him in the present and the future, it'll be known on some level of consciousness. Maybe play heart-shaped box, it's what Kurt wrote for Courtney before she killed him.
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey. Don't worry to much because you could make yourself sick. If he makes it maybe he will realize that doing drugs really wasn't the best decision he's ever made and maybe he will quit doing them. Don't give up hope. Okay? I'm here if you need to talk.
    | Posted on 2005-04-04 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]
      i have the same complex as him and curt.a lot ofrock stars are disturbed and their pain makes beautiful music.the only difference is i learned that the drugs and alcohol make things worse.the smarter you are,the more deamons you have and if the drugs are strong enough,you wont be
    such beauty from pain makes no sense,but i bealive that no making sense,the world i mean,and no solution,makes the pain worse

    this is all my interpetation
    there are many different
    and as kurt said]
    nature i s a whore

    wes all
    toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-04-04 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]


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