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    dots Submission Name: eye reflectiondots
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    Author: winged_writer_robyn
    ASL Info:    16/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 116/162/44
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       my last memory of my bf...he left for vegas today and will be back in 6 more days


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    dotseye reflectiondots
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    i look at my eyes
    looking into your eyes
    past your soul
    i see my own
    i long to stay here in your arms
    and search those familiar eyes
    that i know so well
    the deep dark brown
    consumes me
    into a warm abyss
    searching
    for the light that shines
    deep within
    so i will always remember
    how my eyes appear
    in yours.




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