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    dots Submission Name: a good employeedots
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    Author: toyysruss
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 494/336/134
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 334
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    dotsa good employeedots
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    we should all be
    an employee,of humanity
    don't be late

    to take the time
    and be kind
    even to those who aren't
    when can you start

    to think of others
    before you think of yourself
    if someone is in need
    help them out
    there's the whisle

    it's not a glamours job
    there are no vacations
    and you don't need
    reliable transporation
    to get on you're job

    the only bonus,you will recieve
    is that maybe when you are in need
    of a good employee
    you'll get someone like me




    Submitted on 2005-04-04 18:23:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is cute, but with a real message behind it. I would clean up the spelling and punctuation errors, but otherwise I don't have any thoughts on changes to make.
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by redthewitch | [ Reply to This ]
      nice, short but nice! Discribed what people should be now a days, but are not by any means...I like how u compared being kinda to others with getting a job...Great job on this..keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-04-04 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]



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