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    dots Submission Name: Dream the Rdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 1
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDream the Rdots

    Submitted on 2005-04-04 23:41:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I be luvin poems about Pirates ye land lubber rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i frgot me eye patch...must be somewhrrrrrr in thise here blank canvas matey...rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr imust find me parrrrrrrrrrrrot and slice him into tiny pieces...then we'll feed it to me pet Guienea Pig RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...I just be a swashbucklin PiRat grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr so leave me be!

    Thanks for the mental image :0
    3 cheers for Tiph the Epiph :)
    | Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece is just so empty. Void of all emotion. It says ntohing. I mark it a big fat zero lololol

    well rdrr. blshahahahhahahahahahahhahahha

    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      Mocky, mocky- mock -MOCK I join them all in the dream and sarcasm and mocking mockitude that is the mock amok... MOCK! Peace, love and mocky, mocky, mocky! ~#6-
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm dreamin' baby. I have to, there's nuthin to read! (I hate it when that happens) Am I missing the point to a surrealistic masterpiece? You've got more comments for nothing than a lot of members get for good [censored]! Way to go!
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Definitely an amazing piece of art. I love everything you've done with it. The rhyme scheme is so subtle, it is like it;s nonexistent. And the imagery is so stark, so glaring white.

    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by DeadGod | [ Reply to This ]
      So...iz only HyproGlo going to be BRAVEnuf 2 comment on this...DREAM...it'z a blank canvas...see what u want 2 b...get it...get it y'all...the invisible is that which is truly in TRUTH seen. LOVE< PEACE>JOY 2 myself & all my homiez...
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I love those invisible ink poems. My favorite line is: " ". Followed by the third stanza. Cool shee-at. Like what you feel from laying back on a dock, by a pond gazing at the stars...at least thats what I got out of this. Nice job.
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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