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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsconfuseddots
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    sleepy days,
    wide awake nights,
    climbing down slowly,
    falling up hights.
    making up dreams,
    of where i want to be,
    whilst living in a world,
    we call reality.
    hard living,
    whilst easy sleep,
    confusing for you,
    but understood by me.




    Submitted on 2005-04-05 10:03:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think the title of this poem is very fitting, because i am completely confused. what excatly does this mean? an what does the word whilst mean? i also feel the flow is to choppy not in a unique freah way just in a cinfused cant follow kind of way. sorry just didnt feel it. try again and keep writing>
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by gypsy83 | [ Reply to This ]


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