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    dots Submission Name: A Vision of Future Lovedots
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    Author: Tarek Refaat
    ASL Info:    24/m/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 370/508/212
    Words: 363
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Vision of Future Lovedots
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    Truly , madly , deeply...
    The 3 words from a song..
    A song I've listened to for so long..
    representing perhaps many of us
    with the feelings inside us.

    Visualizing you who you are
    the one across the seas
    in a land too far,

    With your fair dark skin
    and dark eyes..
    with your touch which makes
    me reach the top skies..

    will I reach your love
    fairy of the lands ?
    will you take my heart out of my hand..
    where I've been carrying it for so long..
    tying to protect
    but it all went wrong

    I dream of you
    and I think of you
    I speak of you
    and I see you..

    everywhere I go
    and everywhere I look
    your image never parts my mind..

    lovely fairy of the time
    you have my deep desire
    you have me trapped
    you have there
    and my soul can go no where..

    for I would kneel before your care
    I would kneel before your love
    I would forever protect you most
    for you are the of time

    you possess my heart
    you have the key to my soul
    you drive me completely out of control

    I close my eyes you touch my face..
    feeling you .. making my heart race..
    I know you know all about me
    although I know nothing about you
    where are you from
    or how do you know me?


    But I know my heart beats for you

    and all comes to a stop..
    when I reach for you..
    you fade away ..
    and am through..
    I wake up to look around
    and you are no where to be found..

    fairy of time do you exist ?
    fairy of time how can I resist the call ?

    I will wait and see when my time will call..
    to find you .. and forever shall I remember your touch
    for when I find you I will not let go
    and it will be my day to tell you so..





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      ahh Tarek, that's so sweet. makes me wish it was about me ;) you have so much love to give and someday one woman is going to be so lucky to get it all! honestly, you are such a hopeless romantic, that's why i love ya so much* I think though it got a little long but that's just you and i still loved it. the dream that out there is the one for us, who when you meet feels as though you've already spent a lifetime together. it's a dream many can relate to. anywhoo wonderful as always me dear.

    Jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-04-05 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]


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