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    dots Submission Name: Too Much Beautydots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Rococo furniture (and artwork) is so overly ornate that I find it ugly. However, if it were slightly less showy, I'd like it.


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    dotsToo Much Beautydots
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    Your face reminds me that too much beauty
    in one place turns into ugliness
    like atrocious Rococo furniture.




    Submitted on 2004-04-02 11:43:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha, I started laughing, and thats bad because im in the school library.

    Its even funny in the way it's mean.

    Good job even though I dont know what Rococo furniture is.
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by Leala | [ Reply to This ]


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