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    dots Submission Name: Appreciation = Best Friendzdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 582
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       Just got paid, $, and went with my best friend, Hyproglo, 2 the store for "toothpaste & eyedrops"...a heck-of-a-good-time later...well, you'll get "IT".
    I'm happy that I can appreciate the little, seemingly insignificant things...when eye made a fortune I spent a fortune looking for this; "IT" costs me truly nothing but FAITH.
    Love, Peace & Joy 2 all the Elitistz!!!


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    dotsAppreciation = Best Friendzdots
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    It'z a pen
    my "Hello Kitty"
    treasure...
    but wait.it's
    a pencil 2...
    All in "1"
    even on a trip
    2 "Long's"...
    tHE purpose
    seemed only toothpaste & eyedrops..
    yet the druggist is gossiping
    & "Sydney" can't listen to
    anything but elevator
    music (assign notes here; > {})
    "Venus" razors &
    edible facials SING my
    Name:
    "Epiphany" in a drug store.........
    "Hyproglo" reflectionz
    in a "Goldschlager"
    mine, strike "IT"
    rich eternal
    flakes of Gold..
    Hula Hoop workout
    "Crazy Chalk" Golden
    pastel paths..............................
    Look what enjoyment
    "IZ" found anywhere ; > }
    Enjoying tHE beauty
    BEING GREAT SPIRITZ
    NOW
    &
    FOREVER
    A dream in virtue iz always kool reality...; > }




    Submitted on 2005-04-06 01:38:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Venus razors & edible facials...

    hmmmmmm...

    makes one wonder
    makes one sing
    makes one dance in a golden ring
    of sunshine past and darkness shared
    of pulling down
    your underwear!
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      yes, a nice display and an excellent poem from the greatest woman in da wurld

    Gold rings through all your words and this is a perfect example of that. Thank "U" tiffarina ballerina

    Have a good day and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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