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    dots Submission Name: Epiph*A*Koo...my Haike Rulezdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 848
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 135



    Description:
       I am, in some poetic wayz, a rebel...this is another version of "Haiku"...in my world "ITZ" all about freedom...though this was born 4-5-4; the TRUTH iz whatever you make "IT" 2 B...LOVE, PEACE, JOY!!!!

    Much love, peace, & joy 2 all the elite'istz...thank u for making me feel @ home & able 2 B myself!


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    dotsEpiph*A*Koo...my Haike Rulezdots
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    (4) Feel rythym now
    (5) Flo with da FREEdom
    (4) LOVE with "1" ALL...; > } (smiles always included!!!)




    Submitted on 2005-04-06 01:43:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think Jimmy has his Haiku instructions messed up. It's supposed to be 5, 7, 5... Syllables that is. Sorry to burst any bubbles...
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by Areinaka | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey-ya...smile reflected bacck! I know this much is true...because baby you send me. I can see this hIGH_KUOOOOOOOOO! And I know thaT MUCH IS TRUE!
    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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