This makes sense to me. (Not a lot of things do so be proud of yourself). I can see a teenager standing at a cliff making someone think that they're going to jump when they're not. Then they turn around and say "I'm not stupid enough to do this. I just need your help that I've been asking for all these years that you neglected me." Keep up the good work. (I like it when things make sense to me). lol.
its like i wrote this i like the reference to the math and formulas ther is really to many variables to keep up with i have dangled on the edge most of my life and recieved very little help,except helping myself you also used reference to current events and i liked that too}gas
This was a well written piece. For some reason this one stands out from most things I read on this site. I like this a lot; it's quite emotional. And on another note, I like your picture. I have the exact same one printed out and in a sheet somewhere in my journal thing;except mine is inverse. I got in off of a google search, if you were wondering, wich I doubt. I suppose I should end this comment thing now, well, I hope you have a nice life. Congratulations.
this was very different from your other writes having a bad day or just another day this was good and interesting how you step into the emotions and then step out good read and good write thanx for your previous comments sandman