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    Author: acapone
    ASL Info:    32mnh
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 24/25/10
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 836
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 187



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    I cannot allow myself to be enlisted in you demonic armies, your legions of pain.
    I will not follow you decrepid creis of blood filled rain.
    for I am not a soldier of death.




    Submitted on 2005-04-06 14:37:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short and sweet. I love this.. its really deep and really in depth.. I liked some of the emotion... very sweet.. Usually the short ones are the best... <..>
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    By the way, welcome to this site...

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    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple and sweet. I like this. It is deep. A lot deeper than poems that are 20 times as long. I like this. I am not a soldier of death either. I want to read more of your writing, keep it up. :)
    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by longwinterdays | [ Reply to This ]


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