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    dots Submission Name: Bathtub Poemdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 916
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 200



    Description:
       This is in the vein of "Gone Forever" by Barriss Mills. That's a better poem, but I was just writing to be writing. This literally happened yesterday though.


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    dotsBathtub Poemdots
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    The great poem came to me in the bathtub
    as I lathered my back with the brush.
    It vanished as I washed the suds away
    another would-be masterpiece
    lost to my sleep-dry mind.




    Submitted on 2004-04-02 14:55:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I disagree with Pete LOL, the ideas disappear in the shower too--I think it's the shampoo, the drain, or the towel! This is a refreshing, fun little piece...now i want to read some Barriss Mills. Thanks, silver
    | Posted on 2004-04-04 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      Great poem. So many times a wonderful thought may be on the tip of the tongue, and then evade one as quickly as it came.
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting and fresh. Yes, many of the masterpiece's slip by, don't they? LOL....This was fun to read.
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]


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