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    dots Submission Name: Dangkedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 7
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 935
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    Bytes: 53



    Description:
       Alfred at work is teaching me German-Word-A-Day. Translated means Ourselves He

    All

    It (child)

    You I

    She



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    dotsDangkedots
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    Uns Er
    Euch
    Es
    Du Ech
    Zie




    Submitted on 2004-04-02 15:47:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i don't know if there's a typo, or if i'm just reading it incorrectly. However, though i am found of ramstein i'd not class you with their stuff. completely different element and feel
    | Posted on 2006-03-16 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      thats bizarre. its cool too. have you ever heard rammstein? it reminded me of the song, "Sonne", you should hear it, the beggining kina sounds like your poem a little bit even thought i think in the song he's counting.
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by Cutting Envy | [ Reply to This ]


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