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    dots Submission Name: Brother in Toulouse-Lautrecdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 654
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 375



    Description:
       I was reading a book on Vincent when "IT" brought up "The Dance At The Moulin Rouge". "1890"

    Jurassic 5 echoes "What'z Golden"...

    I decided not 2 cook & Hyproglo & eye went 4 a bottle of "Slug Gulch" wine; fresh bread, real butter, kool staff; why the hell would anyone go 2 applebeez...poetic art to cuisine as Vincent iz 2 a blank canvas!

    "For I know my Father comforted me, "Eye will never leave you and the door is forever open..."
    Love, PeaCE. JOY!!!


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    dotsBrother in Toulouse-Lautrecdots
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    Live from the Moulin Rouge::;;

    Eye C
    lifetime eternal
    LOVE
    A see me an le
    nameless
    FaCe
    amongst tHE
    Crowd...
    CLOUDDDDDDD;;;;;
    reaVEAled
    /Forever embrace
    TRUTH!!!
    I N L O V E!@#$%^&*()_+




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      very interesting b/c i've never seen anything like it before. I don't even know what to say. You definitely break away from ordinary here, and show the most original form I've ever seen to say what you must. Kool.
    It's not easy to read though. I had to put time into reading and re-reading... and I have no patience. That's my fault though, not yours.
    What's Golden is your uniqueness...

    ~Akhi~
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Alize | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmm...I C...icy...eye sea...aiy see...ai caramba bonita senorita...a nameless face amongst the crowd that shouts out to you "HI!" and lets you know you are alright. Like a poppy in the cloud... I didnt feel like cooking last night either...going out was a much more esquizzzzzz-it ideer...Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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