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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Walk *dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       Nature - how can "IT" be explained the glorious gift of creation....walk in the dark as light and do not fear.

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    Great Day 2 All & to All a GREAT night!

    Epiphany ; > }

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    dotsMidnight Walk *dots

    The dew*tipped leaves
    licked my toes
    The stars*revealed light
    The pond*reflected
    The late*night meander
    The fields*blinding
    ; > }

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      This may be slightly odd, but to me, this piece of writing is incredibly evocative - and almost erotic. Such a sensual beginning - "The dew*tipped leaves licked my toes Open...". To me, this was a personification of Nature - the softness and subtleness of its nights, its ways, its colours. Wonderful, truly wonderful :)
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by Katia | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiffany this so simply pretty to look at and to read outloud and to think about -simply great! The descriptively active arrangement of words absolutely fab for instance this "The fields*blinding
    Now that is cool Tiffany! ~always poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      hehehe the *s and stuff was cute. It gave it a real feel of being read, it made it all see very... cute it makes me giggle. Which is odd, considering the poem is all about calm walks and such. I liked it, it was very light and simple, nice to relax sometimes =^..^= ~Coraz the Wind-over
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonderful imagery. The beauty of nature captured so eloquently.

    What else can I say, nitpicking this is impossible so to offer a creative critique is poiintless, perfection!

    your friend
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]
      Now this is beauty. Gosh, I can just feel the dew-tipped leaves tickling my toes as I read this. A midnight walk under the stars.. What a lovely picture you've painted here in these few words.

    :) Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it when my toes get licked too...hee-hee. Meandering with gold (shclager), HA! Your words always brighten the paths that we travel on.

    Good job and I am glad I got to experience the story behind the story...VH1! WELCOME and Qualantalaqua
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      what is with all of the * s??? But other then those that seem to get in the way at time, I really like it. I think it's pretty awesome. Keep writing! I love the way you have with words...
    | Posted on 2005-04-07 00:00:00 | by painofthanatos | [ Reply to This ]

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