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whore (revised)

Author: painfullyme
ASL Info:    23/F/MA
Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335 /456 /72
Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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i've been working on this for a couple of weeks. i think it's come a long way. suggestions?

whore (revised)

painful, the notion
that i was never more
than a girl you had trouble
turning into a whore

scary, the thought
that no matter what
let myself get too close
to becoming your slut

used me for money
the sex always free
never quite cared
what you were doing to me

lied to me, lover
told me to trust
then used me until
i quenched your lust

took me for granted
turned love to despise
now, previously hidden,
hate has lost it's disguise

Submitted on 2005-04-07 23:33:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i liked this, the meaning of this poem is so true, and it shouldnt be hidden, but they are much the slut as the person in question, remember it takes two to tango x x x x
| Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm... i am sorry you had to go through that... that ind of thing sucks... i cannot really relate... because nothing like that has happened to me... and i have not done anything like that... but the poem is well written to an extent where i can feel how you felt when you wrote it... mheh... no advice to give... my poems suck anyway... you wouldn't want my advice...
| Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]

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