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Author: Wook
ASL Info:    26/M/KY
Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 21 /29 /12
Words: 184
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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this is what it is, the person whom this is meant for will know in time.


here i sit again waiting for your private wisper to let me know where i stand amongst all things that are you. can u hear my heart ache every time we are in each other presence. the trimbling of my hand as i caress your sweet face.
in this moment , my time as come to share my self with you in the same seductive whisper.I know people have torn and weathered your heart in the past and i can see in your eyes how thick the walls run and i am still here my love chipping away, to finally have you the way u have me, as the night cascades on each of our meetings i lay in my bed in wonderment of how one person can stir up all this emotions in varying degrees even something as simple as a smile directed to me. i think of ways to show you my true intentions but i know it comes down to time and i am here waiting..with patient unconditional unrelenting love. all you have to do is call out to me.

Submitted on 2005-04-07 23:56:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I dont know what to say...your feelings are so passionate... i think you should write more and tell her what you think, how you it all to her.
| Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by deepinthought | [ Reply to This ]

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