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Lay Down and Die


Author: hybridmagnolia
ASL Info:    19/male
Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 198 /273 /75
Words: 271
Class/Type: Lyrics /What you did
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at first, the lyrics may appear to be dark, gothic, and show signs of wanting to give up. this song, however, is about not giving up without a fight. i lived a tough life so far. had to learn to stand my own and support myself often. being alone has made me realize how much i take that for granted.


Lay Down and Die



(Every time I feel it break apart inside of me
I see a different side of me I never want to see
My inner fire gives me strength beyond my own belief
Either way I know it’s going to be the end of me)
I feel its presence take me
I feel it bring me to my knees
I feel it every time I breathe
I fear I’ll never be free

I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
For you anymore

(Every night I’m lying sleepless on a broken bed
Visions of the end continue rushing through my head
Something’s telling me I’m better off being dead
But that’s a thought I know I’m always going to dread)
I feel its presence take me
I feel it bring me to my knees
I feel it every time I breathe
I fear I’ll never be free

I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
For you anymore

I can’t believe
I couldn’t see
Couldn’t look past
What has been
Given to me
A feeling so free
A chance to be
Now I see
It driving me
Insane, but I don’t
Want to be
Rescue me
Then abandon me
turn your back and
Take it away from me

I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
I WON’T LAY DOWN AND DIE
For you anymore




Submitted on 2005-04-08 01:28:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I could see thie music behind this be like scremo/whispery alternative.
Like it could start off and the lead singer could be like whispering and then when you get to the angry coures and the last verse could be screaming, but legable screaming whit maybe a thick bass line, and stand out drums.
that just how I pictured it when I read it. I really liked it and maybe one day I'll ask if I could borrow it and direct my freinds band. But I dont know yet.
Kacey
| Posted on 2005-04-09 00:00:00 | by Lachesis | [ Reply to This ]


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