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    dots Submission Name: Nelson Mandella Terroristdots

    Author: ARCHIE
    ASL Info:    37 YOA Male in Africa
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 90/126/40
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNelson Mandella Terroristdots

    The line is thin,
    the soldier said,
    between the devil and the saint
    its shown as clear as it can be
    by people in the press you see.

    At orders from the President
    they lie and tell us horrors tales
    that lead us to the
    bloody trails in desert dust
    where children lie

    Its hard, you see, to tell the truth
    tween terrorist and
    men of good,
    as Nelson Mandela
    a terrorrist for long
    and long in African jails
    for freedoms song.

    how then can I,
    in freedoms eye,
    judge right from wrong when all along
    they tell the still night
    darkeness song of blood and strife
    to me and mine
    when they are wrong.

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