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    dots Submission Name: "THE PHARMACIST"dots
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    Author: LameMansTerms
    ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713/1012/165
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I am not going to say what this is about. It has many different ways to look at it is and it could be all of those things and more.


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    dots"THE PHARMACIST"dots
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    I bring out the best in you.
    I make you do things
    yesterday you couldn’t do.
    I bring you pleasure.
    I take away your pain.
    I have so many names.

    I show you hope where there is none.
    When you're running on empty;
    I always give you some.
    That little something
    When you’re down to nothing,
    That little get up and go.
    That something extra;
    a secret you and I only know.

    Sometimes I see it in your eyes.
    How badly you need me;
    Need me to be inside.
    But let us not forget;
    trust can go corrupt with time.

    Shake me.
    I too love the sound.
    Taste me.
    Take me down.
    Soon you wont feel that.
    The pain will subside.
    You’ll be much more willing to take it;
    If you're still alive.....

    l a m 3 m a n $ t 3 r m $





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      Step Right Up! Yeah, you're right, although it is very druggie on the surface, there are many interpretations there, for the discerning who wish to delve.

    Nice tho, it reminded me of a ghosty-type "bad angel" sitting on the shoulder whispering.

    How you doing man? if you're writing like this, you must be doing fine.

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-06-01 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      um, sometimes I feel like a walking pharmacy and to me this was all my helpful little medicine bottles lined up like soldiers to help me conquer my body's little glitches. I would be nowhere without some of my little pilly friends that have helped me become well again. This was a tidy little write Mike, very organized and well thought out...Mags
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by Magnolia | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats hilarious, that you changed the title. I read this last night when it was titled after a Black Flag song, when i saw that i immediatly got up and searched through the huge stack of punk LPs to find Damaged, i put it at the end of side A and listened while i read....thinking it might have something to do with the song. but no i was surprised to read this poem of which you say there can be many meanings.
    yes, i understand how someone could see a few things here but all i heard speaking to me through this was the drug addict demon inside us. (i still believe i was the funniest and most witty when i was on coke.) i see you changed a few lines as well as the title to suit the drug theme a little more, i really like this (i wonder if there is something you've written that i won't like)...the idea, the sound of it, feels to me like something i wanted to write but couldn't articulate.
    by the way i can still view My lover, it just says the old title on my page. and i knew you had some tats, that was sorta easy though, i don't think i've met a punk fan with no tattoes.

    CC
    | Posted on 2005-04-09 00:00:00 | by C. Starr | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm gonna lean toward this bein a drug, instead of a woman - cuz women don't warn u. Tell me thas ur wife's ass w/ ur tattoo! Personally, i feel no problem with drugs ykno? Not my bag but i figure if you just need one more thing to make it, no matter wot it is u might as well go about gettin it ykno?
    shard
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]
      wow what one thing can teach another.i feel as if i am watchin the process of which you expressed into words. the one part that you can take to teach to others would have to be the last verse. all in all it shows how easily you can ruin your life with one little thing.
    all to gether it is expressed os perfectly.
    ~rose~
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by rose_thorn88 | [ Reply to This ]


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