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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    Gnashing teeth.
    Clandestine grandeur,
    Ensnared in mediocrity
    Held suckling to
    Voluptuous apathy

    Clenched fists.
    Wild inertia,
    Atrophied existence
    Obtusely grubbing for
    Smothered aspirations

    Battering head.
    Valiant listlessness
    Liquidated serendipity
    Placated consciousness gasps at
    Palpable destiny




    Submitted on 2005-04-08 13:48:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Frustration, what an appropriate title. Damn you've got a wide vocab. Did you use a thesaurus? Cuz I think I may need one, when I read over it again. Very original!
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by ash20819 | [ Reply to This ]


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