Short and Sweet
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Short and Sweet
I fell in love with a boy.... This boy is my best-friend... To tell him would be a mistake... Bringing all we have to an end... I don't know how much I can take... But I'm sure willing to try.... Rejection would make my heart break.... But so would living a lie... |
Submitted on 2005-04-08 20:03:58 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| This is a very good poem of a most complex problem. It is very short and simple yet it says so very much. Having a guy as your best friend is something I can definitely relate to as I had a guy as my best friend for the longest time in my life. We always remained friends and the thought of losing his friendship was a tough one. It is a most difficult decision you are faced with here as you dont know what will happen but by the sounds of it, I think you have already decided to tell him your feelings. One thing you can feel good about telling him is you would never have to wonder what may have been or wonder if you should have said something. This is a good and sincere poem. Best of luck to you with this. Take care. Lorna  | Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ] | I like this..it is simple yet really conveys that ambivalence..being torn between two things...well id think youd have to ask yourself which youd value more- a friendship that uve had for a long time...or a relationship which might end leaving the two of you not as close..lol, nah just follow ure heart. I have a rule for meself tho, i dislike going out with good friends, cos it ruins the friendship. friendship is more spesh i think ^_^ | anyway I like how this ended Rejection would make my heart break... But so would living a lie... very nice...and also the use of rhyme is appropriate for the length of this poem. makes it sweet and flowing :) Thanks for the read, peace. | Posted on 2005-05-14 00:00:00 | by pennyroyal tea | [ Reply to This ] | i like your style you have great rythm i can really relate to this poem i think everyone gets in that situation at one time or another good work | | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by kcck | [ Reply to This ] | I suggest you go for it and if doen't feel the same way then try to act like nothing happened. Your poem is short, but it gets to the point and doesn't ramble on. great work! | | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by sheltie | [ Reply to This ] | This is a really good poem! | It has a great rhyme scheme and a good content and theme... I don't know what to tell you about your predicament but I do wish you good luck! | Posted on 2005-04-09 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ] | I like it. I think you could have tried a different form, but it was still true. The odd thing is that i feel that way right now. lol. well its still god. Keep writing. | Cheers, ~Sephe~ | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ] | nice write. the rhyming goes with it. i'm not one for much rhyming poetry but i'll make an exception for this one. also because i know what you're going through. Love's a [censored]. sorry for the language haha. | | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by binkerz | [ Reply to This ] | Wow! If you look at any of my poems you will be able to see that i CANNOT rhyme! haha but your poem goes together so beautifully! I can totally relate to what you're talking about as well! Anyways I think that you did a wonderful job because your poem is also so very original. | | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ] | Wow! If you look at any of my poems you will be able to see that i CANNOT rhyme! haha but your poem goes together so beautifully! I can totally relate to what you're talking about as well! Anyways I think that you did a wonderful job because your poem is also so very original. | | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ] | |
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