Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: untitleddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Bozzi
    ASL Info:    17-Male-Vermont
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 1/1/1
    Words: 312
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 305
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2031



    Description:
       No one knows the men who talk amongst themselves better than they do.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsuntitleddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Somebody wake the king. There's a presence in his hall. A perpetually glowing being whos smile shines on the ceiling.

    And we don't understand his teachings at all.........

    He is he and he tells us we are you all.........

    So wake up the leader,
    watch his leather lips go down
    Down down down.

    They’d really would enjoy seeing his frown.



    Somebody here faked clean. Under the bed lies all their precious things. A dark and uncouth place to hide objective stuff.

    But it's the only place were no one looks at all.........

    Especially the entities whom like great heights.........

    They'll take your stash and then they'll steal your rights.

    Because they are the ones who decided rights were right
    and wrote them down
    Down down down.

    they'd really enjoy watching you frown.



    This lady here thinks she's lean. She's bony tight and romances Mr. clean. The perfect habitat to brood many bacterial things.

    What grows in our insides must come out.........

    Her Costly bad breath turns ugly heads away.........

    She wants us to step aside her rottenness in dismay
    She wants our tangled heads to touch the ground.
    A bow of silence meant to bring us down
    Down down down......


    I cannot do it alone anyway. My backs to bent from long walks in the rain.
    My umbrella's been blown away from me, by giants howling in pain.........

    My comrades who still hold on to theirs close them and sing:

    Hey brother man. Sister girl. We still fight hand in hand. And our feet still touch the world. But listen wide. hear us tall. Our forces will not divide.

    You will not ever see us fall.

    You will have accomplished nothing at all.




    Submitted on 2005-04-09 00:08:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      what kind of song is this? is it chritian rock? or folk or like pop? i only ask, cause i pretend to be a singer, and i always find it interesting the way people write, like deftones, what was it, drive? its like a five sentences long, but it has so much impact the way he sings it! and to this day, i still can not come up with my own five sentence song! lol! but i was trying to figure out where you were coming from with this one, and i can't place it! i was just curious, keep up the good work!;)
    | Posted on 2005-04-09 00:00:00 | by B.I.T.S. | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.