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Chapter One

Author: manda_bear
ASL Info:    24;f; alabama
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Chapter One

Let me tell all of ES about how my boyfriend and I met. It was my second year at our Technical school and it seemed like another normal day to me, but I was wrong. A group of students from another school walk in and to my surprise one of the new students starting out that year was someone that I already knew. I didn't say anything because I didn't think he would recognized who I was so I ignored him.

Three days later another new guy comes into the room. Very attractive. His eyes were so gorgeous that they took my breath away. Unusualthing for me to really notice right off. I had to keep from commenting because at this point in time I had a boyfriend and things weren't looking so good anyway. I waited for the teacher to start class which usually takes about thirty minutes for him to do because he was always talking to the other guys in the room. (I was the only girl). I sat there listening attentively as he began the lesson for that day. It was math and I have always had problems with math. I suddenly felt like someone was staring at me so I looked in the direction of the guy that had the gorgeous eyes. He looks away quickly, but not quickly enough for me to catch him staring. It was time for me to go to my real math class because I failed it in nineth grade. He had to go to an english class to retake as well. We still hadn't spoken at this point so we just kept quit.

One week later we're being taught how to convert amperage into volts by math. I knew that was my problem the year before because of my lack of knowledge for math. Our teacher says "Those who still don't get it can meet me over here to this side of the room and I will help you the best that I can." I looked down at the paper that I had in front of me and knew that I was going to need all the help I can get. I walked over to where some of my other class mates were sitting and looked at the guy that I became very attracted to without even knowing what he was like. I kept calm so as not to say anything stupid.
I looked at my paper again and said "I'm screwed." He looked up at me and said "Up the butt." I kind of laughed to myself and said "All up the butt." Those were our first words spoken to each other. I know real romantic huh? We became quick friends after that. I found out a few days later that this guy liked me. I didn't know much about him but I did know that I liked him too.

About a week later my boyfriend at the time and I were beginning to have a different opinion about my schedule that I had. I was and officer in the club FCCLA and I was in girl scouts on top of going to tech. He hated it because I didn't really try to spend any time with him. We talked on the phone that Saturday. He confessed that he was still in love with an ex-girlfriend who was one of my friends at the time and I confessed that I just wasn't really happy. We made the decision to just be friends, which didn't work out there for a little while, we became friends about a month or two later. I told my friend that we broke up and she was happy because she didn't really like him in the first place. She knew him before I even dated him. That following Monday I looked at the guy that I was starting to crush on and thought to myself that I could possibly have a chance a love. When he sat down behind me I turned around and said "My boyfriend and I just broke up this weekend." He looked at me and says "That's gotta suck." I laughed and said "No. Not really. He and I just weren't really very happy anyway. He was still in love with his ex and I didn't want anyone trying to make me do something that I didn't want to do. Like quit all that I'm doing right now." He looked at me a little confused. I guess he thought that it was strange that I wasn't really phased by the fact I just got out of a bad relationship. I knew that something was about to happen between me and this guy, whom I now know his name Justin Sabisch, I could feel it more and more every time we talked. He finally asked me out two weeks after the other guy and I broke up. I told him yes because I knew something great was going to happen between us.

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  I think you did a very good job telling how you and your Justin met, what made it awesome was that it wasn't some surreal romantic story, and wow to hear all the way up my butt,just must have blow your heart away,lol

good write, heading over to read the second chapter
| Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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