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    dots Submission Name: Saturn Daydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 780
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 203



    Description:
       Just a saturday afternoon poem. God Bless us for all the good we have and all that is available 2 us all in 1 through FAITH.

    Great weekend and mind-flights 2 all Elitists!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsSaturn Daydots
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    This vessel asleep
    this soul aflight
    time dances
    past
    &
    awakens
    2
    beauty gliding
    in flight
    guiding "ITs"
    day 2 night




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    ||| Comments |||
      You've captured beautifully the story of all our nights.

    The freedom and gentle touch of angels teaching us that everything is fine.

    I love it!

    Nan
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      "vessel asleep, soul aflight"!?!?!?!?!
    You are the METAPHOR QUEEN!
    Hell yeah! '
    Too cool!
    Too beautiful!
    And I must agree with Mr.Hyperglo...VERY well written...
    You probably just popped it out of your brainspan without even trying!
    Excellent beginning, middle and end...
    Really shows how much you must appreciate the simpl things in life...the beauty they contain...the miracle of a single day passing, and all that it held.
    Wow...
    Let me shut up now...LOL!
    C~ya SckrifflePiph...
    D.A.T. wuz here...
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, isnt it wonderful to go to sleep and things are beautiful...then have beautiful dreams and wake up to beauty gliding by. This one just makes me think those thoughts. Very well written ma dear...your soul is always flying...have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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