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    dots Submission Name: The addictiondots
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    Author: biwitchin_angel
    ASL Info:    28/ F/ Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 15/12/6
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 256
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       I had a bad craving for chocolate. After I ate half a candy bar I thought about all the other chocoholics out there.


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    Sweat drips down your body, soaking your cloths and hair.
    You can't stop thinking about it, you need it like fresh air.
    Your hands itch to touch it, body aching with desperate need.
    The urge has a tight grip on your chest, your're filled with lust and greed.
    So hard to ignore the call, that's why you put it out of sight.
    Oh, it's too much to handle, you've got to see it in the light.
    Pulling it out of the hiding place, your mouth waters with glee.
    You think "I'm strong. Just a little bit won't hurt me!"
    What a hard addiction to break. One you've bravely fought.
    You raise it to your mouth and then sink your teeth into that piece of chocolate.
    The pleasure brings to your cheek a tear,
    As you place the last bite in your mouth, you think "there's always next year."




    Submitted on 2005-04-09 20:12:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hehe... ok sorry thats funny.. i have never been addicted to anything so i guess this is funnier to me than to toher people... nice write.
    ~Caroline~
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by Caroline_19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah this was hilarious. I love chocolate and cigarets, and i know how this feels. I am addicted to both and its hard to withstand from either one.
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know how you intended this piece to be, but I found it kind of funny. Sure, there are a lot of people addicted to chocolate out there and I love how you display the mentality of those who get pleasure from eating it.
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]



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