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    dots Submission Name: BEI NG NOW <@> AM ALLdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 647
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 828



    Description:
       Happy and Engligtening SONday 2 All!

    Your words all are a song of inspiration and a cry that does not go unheard nor appreciated.
    Many gracious thank yous!

    LOVE * PEACE * JOY

    special thanks to hyproglo, rhea & misako for starting my day out with a grand smile that floats effortlessly!


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    dotsBEI NG NOW <@> AM ALLdots
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    <@> danced with the stars
    all yesterday
    playing in NOW.!.
    "IT" was NOW <@> understood.....
    even when the Son Shines the stars are not gone from sight they have just become the LIGHT.........................!..................................
    <@> conversed with the geese
    all morning
    singing in NOW.!.
    "IT" was NOW <@> heard.......
    even when "I" am deaf the geese are talking
    they have become the
    VOICE.........................................................
    <@> shared LOVE, PEACE, JOY with Elitists
    all day
    creating in NOW.!.
    even when <@> am learning without knowing
    I have become one with
    TEACHER #
    For BEING NOW <@> AM ALL!




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    ||| Comments |||
      NOW DASS WHUT I'M TAWLKIN BOUT!
    YOU JESS TOO BAD!
    Excellent writing my friend...UNIQUE is an understatement!
    please never change...and keep up the excellent work...and TAKE THE DANG SHADES OFF!
    QUAMAWALLABANGBANG!
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    D.A.T.
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweetheart, you're getting too good at this. This is very cleverly written, and not just the joyous song it seems to be, I hope I didn't miss all the messages that you hid inside it.
    Very well done
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      You have such a brilliant way with words and symbols and putting them together to create vivid images...like:

    even when the Son Shines the stars are not gone from sight they have just become the LIGHT...!...

    I loved that line. Nice way to start the sunny sun sonday! Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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