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    dots Submission Name: ravenously voraciousdots
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    Author: runaway_poet
    ASL Info:    21/m/limbo
    Elite Ratio:    6.2 - 42/41/21
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       this is not one of my usual depressed/thinking poems and its not realy about me i wrote this when i was writing a vampire story welll enjoy


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    For you, for you I crave for you
    im ravenous so voracious for you.
    Craving you flesh craving your taste
    Knowing the regrets that will have to be faced.


    Sneak to you like mice.
    Loving the smell of your spice.

    So I lay wait salivating and so voracious,
    Its my weakness being so ravenous.
    This huger this craving overwhelms me making me so vicious,
    Im such a beast and such a monster for being so capricious.

    This lust this hunger so taboo,
    For you, for you I crave for you.
    Id whisper into your ear waste not your last breath make it a wish
    And as you lay limp white as porcelain, Im beside a kill to relish.
    Indulging in the crimson honey that had flowed ,
    So voracious so ravenous when Im in this mode.


    This craving this lust shattered the restraint pushing goading,
    So melodic that scream that cry of fear and pain moves me like a song youd sing.
    A sweet smile covered with you as I look down to see you turning blue,
    For you, for you I craved for you .

    Now standing strong your vitality coursing through every part of me,
    Remembering the taste of your crimson sea.
    I drank and drank until there was nothing more
    It kept the monster at bay, kept it at shore
    But now, now I crave more.




    Submitted on 2005-04-10 16:35:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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