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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 927
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       this is my mostest bestest whatever you moron I like it like your mom...so talk to me later...


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    I am mad with myself
    angry stupid me
    all full of shit
    all full of it

    I am mad with myself
    willing myself to draw this picture of you
    but your ugly
    so I give up




    Submitted on 2005-04-11 14:55:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok, self-hate, all too familiar subject not only for me, but nearly everyone. rather than writing what emotions are portrayed on your sleeve so to speak, try being more metaphorical. Use your words to paint the picture you see, the one so ugly you give up in the middle, why's it ugly, why are you angry? Just suggestions, be well
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn jazzy i hopeu do fineout there...im sorry that you don have anyone to visit realy, i really am..i hope ha u will tho, i really do...well i likedthis but i was really sad, take care bye
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      Uh, is this true? Are you really mad at yourself? I don't think you should be if you are. You're to pretty to be mad at yourself. Other than that I think that this poem is good. Just as long as you know that your writings can lead to great things one day. I know you think that I'm just telling you this to be nice but I'm not. If you work hard at your dreams they will come true. I'm being really and truely honest with you too. I hope that you believe me. Follow your heart and dreams will come true.
    | Posted on 2005-04-12 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]


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