Description: Television today has tainted our society but we are as a whole unaware of it for it is pleasant to the emotions that play in our hearts. We love Hollywood almost too much and so many people have become slaves to all the evils that it truly stands for.
Hollywood Dream? -------------------------------------------
Only now is all they know
About God and their creation,
About their lives, about their loves,
Bought from a Hollywood station.
And when eMpTyV is all they see
It stuns imagination.
And all they see to be unique
Is only just the same
For children growing up to be
Wishers of the fame.
T.V. taught them it is grand
To be so high in stature
To play Miss Fame at her game
And try so hard to match her.
For now beliefs are pushed so hard
By every silver screen
Taking all false hope and want
To render it routine.
this is good. a subject touched upon so much that i was really expecting this to totally blow when i read the description. but the style and sublte yet screaming satirical voice in this make this truely shine as a piece. very good. this is definately a fave.
it's good to see talent at a young age. most 17 year old writers are writing about how depressed they are and blah blah who cares. (no offense to them) but you seem to have artistical ambition which is the distinction between someone who writes and someone who is a writer. i genually enjot this!!!!
Absolutely beautiful, and so totally true.. The images that you conveyed through this are so true about life today, and how we perceive fame.. It is sad that our lives, and the lives of our children are so governed by what we see on the television.. I think my favourite part is lines 11 - 14..
"T.V. taught them it is grand To be so high in stature To play Miss Fame at her game And try so hard to match her."
These lines really show just how much we all want to be just like that famous woman or man that we so idolize.. Beautiful work..