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    dots Submission Name: Coincidence??!dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I just have to thank all of the writers of Elite that I've had the pleasure of reading. The level of talent witnessed is just phenomenal and All are gifts of Great Spirit, God, Buddha, whatever U associate "IT" with.
    Although, we can be nasty, negative, loving, truthful, positive, expressive, screaming,,,,,,most here are tolerant and appreciative for the interaction that most of us do not get from the majority of our environments. WE ARE CREATORS. WE ARE SPIRITUAL. WE ARE LOVE. WE ARE HATE. WE ARE HUNGRY. WE ARE FED. WE ARE TOGETHER. WE ARE ALONE. "IT"z all relevant, in my world, and I am not a converter, I am an instrument of God and an alerter.
    Many gracious thank yous to the Elitists and eternal blessings to my friend Jimmy for his marvellous and mystical contribution to LIFE, LOVE, PEACE & JOY@!.

    Thank you to Dave, Hyproglo and to my other soul friends for their total, love and understanding, guardianship, friendship, LOVE & support.

    I used to dream of being an artist and never felt worthy. If all you get from this, for those of you who stuck it out, (he he he) is NEVER GIVE UP!!! DREAM THE IMPOSSIBLE AND PUT ALL YOUR FAITH IN YOUR INNERMOST RELATIONSHIP WITH YOUR INFINITE BEING. BE HAPPY. BE SAD. BUT ALWAYS BE LOVING, TOLERANT, FORGIVING, & TRUE TO YOURSELF AND "IT"!

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    Sitting amongst the late day
    Communicating the beauty
    of tHIS environment
    praising through "1"
    each our special places
    of SOUL
    Energy emmanates and
    smiles satellite ALL

    Submitted on 2005-04-11 20:35:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Now this was so crystal clear for me tiff hope that its okay to get things crystal clear laffs...I really liked this refreshing cleansing poetry...hope for me yet Tiff Ciao! `always poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-12 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Did you mean Sun? Sorry, just had to throw that it...hee-hee. I think you meant Son. You have a magnificent style yourself ma dear, and you can see it through your writings. It is one that is always appreciated and sometimes misunderstood, yet it never goes unnoticed and a person just can tell that it never faulters you, it will never stray from you...therefore "IT" will never let you down. Like you said, from sunshine to sorrow..."IT" is still within you. You confuse the confused and enhance the elitists. Thanks. Thanks for helping me when I get confused and/or "big headed".
    | Posted on 2005-04-11 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice wordplay, kid, but don't overdo the "son" gig. I just loved the first line, "sitiing amonst the sun" is a fabulous concept, and very well put.
    So you believe as I do? It doesn't matter what you believe in, as long as you believe in IT.
    Nice litlle piece,
    Be Happy
    | Posted on 2005-04-11 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      did you mean sun? because the way you put son there.. would kind of make since... but in a different direction than i thought the poem was gonig to go... it was confusing a little because of that... all in all... it was a good poem... a little too short for me... but i still liked it it was rather... enlightening... thank you for the read and i will talk to you later
    | Posted on 2005-04-11 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]

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