Description: just wondering how it is that girls are sluts for liking to do it but its all normal for guys. i mean...were both in the game to score the goal, who cares which team won he coin toss?
"I SCREW" -------------------------------------------
Why is it that when I have sex
Im a slut but not my ex?
Hes the one who undressed first
Like the buttons on his pants just burst.
First hes clothed and then its gone
I did it too but I am wrong.
He called and bragged to all his boys
About the games and the toys.
But I like sex, of this I’m proud
And I don’t think that threes a crowd.
The more the merrier as I say,
We'll screw and screw thru night and day.
But neither of those guys you blame
And that excuse is just plain lame.
Id say I was drunk or even stoned
But I wasn’t either, just wanted boned.
As a woman I shouldn’t admit
I like to be screwed and that’s just it.
But so be it, my secrets out;
Climax is what its all about.
So girls if you like to have sex too
Raise your hand high and say “I SCREW”!
for the love of all that is sexually arousing I SCREW TOO. people dont realize this isn't the 50s anymore and that women can actually admit not only do they have sex, they enjoy it as well...and i say to all the guys that wanna call me a slut, fluck you, i have what i need in my dressor and could totally have no need for you period lol
oh masa teach me your ways with your words. and i agree the double standard is bs and even though i am not a chick i will stand behind ya and say I SCREW!~>
Hahahaha. Simply brilliant! I love the way you think, and I'm a guy! I quite agree about the silly two-faced attitude that's a legacy from some Victorian era. What a delightfully original poem Thanks heaps Be Happy, and keep screwin' Graeme
you go girl...you go...don't let nobody hold u down...personally, all it says is that you know what u want...as for morals, all the holier than thou hypocrites need a good screwing to remind them of why they hide and what they are ashamed of...plus the write was without flaws....keep blazing
biting my tongue here and only gonna give actual helpful critique...and i don't have much to give because this is a well written piece! i think you could tweak it and have a consistent 7-syllable meter, and you could throw in some punctuation corrections, but other than that this is a tightly written piece.
I SCREW I SCREW DAMN I FCKIN SCREW lol now i feel better its funny how ladies are suppost to b respectful and not talk about shhh quiet ""sex""" hehehe nah j/p but its tru come on guys we're humans too hmm its just our nature
*calms myself down* i loved this. it was like a protest and that is what im best at! i totally agree with everything that you have said and its cool that you can say like that! wow. the rhyming was a little forced and it was wrote in a kiddy like form but who the hell cares right? you wrote it to prove a point so i guess you can throw aside all the rest. ~sweet
I really liked this piece for its uncommon content, but I have a few suggestions: I think you need stnazas. I would break it after "I did it too but I am wrong." and "But I wasn’t either, just wanted boned.". also, I would delete the last two lines. I think the line "Climax is what its all about." is a great ending line. The only Line within the poem I was not fond of was "About the games and the toys." I dont know why, but it just didnt sit well with me. In anycase, great work
Raising my hand high I scream "I SCREW"! That one is awesome! I have wondered when someone would finally write something about this topic. Really, I mean, why is it such a double standard? We're all the same. No sex is better than the other, so why do men get all the props and we get all the names?
I am definitely adding this one to my fave's!
However, I do see one mistake, which is a minor one.
"As a I woman I shouldn’t admit"
I think you need to remove the "I", it was probably a minor typo, and we all do it. I just thought I would point it out to you.
If you have any more like this, I would love to read them. I am really into this kind of writing, it's real, not just about love and sadness.
Kepp up the great work, and I hope to read more soon.
This was funny and really does bring out a stereotype doesnt it? And you made your point in a way that makes you feel proud and does not make you sound like just some sex crazed idiot, ya know? Very well done. I liked your rhyme pattern. I dont know why its like that though between men and women...??? We all have our vices...
Submission Name: "I SCREW"
