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    Author: RymingQueen
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 9/14/7
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 795
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1422



    Description:
       Tell me what you think...
    I need some help with getting better...
    I am pretty good though I THINK! LoL
    Just tell me if you relate to this or understand my viewpoint...


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    You LEFT me..
    Why did you take my heart with you..
    You took all my thoughts and tears..
    And now I have nothing to turn on..
    I have pain and sorrow..
    And some forgivness left..
    You cause, Your cause to me for pain..
    You,
    You love this selfish game..
    You just love to take others hearts and make them not have anything left to turn to..
    I can't even cry because of you..
    You....YOU are the reason I left my fears away..
    You, YOU made me chase my own tears away..
    You owned me and I let you have me..
    You took my very unique soul and cried for me...
    You loved me....you said..
    And I loved you too...
    But why did you want to change me?
    To make me be like you?
    You said you liked how we were different..
    Did you really mean that?
    If you did why did you forget that?
    I am my very own...
    Are you?
    Try to be different...
    It will help you...
    You wanted me to change for the better...
    I have too many depressions and bitter words...
    So you say....
    That's why YOU LEFT ME!
    It's what you said..
    If you really loved me...
    You would of helped me through..
    You would of helped me though....
    I, I hate you.....YOur soul....Your heart..
    Why DON'T YOU CARE!!!!!!!??????




    Submitted on 2005-04-12 13:32:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh hunny, that is a beautiful poem, and i have been through the same thing, and there will be others, just do me a favor and don't do anything that'll take you out of this world, its not worth it.
    | Posted on 2005-04-12 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]



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