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    dots Submission Name: Succubusdots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsSuccubusdots
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    Every night on my bed
    in the depths of dreams
    you come to me
    across time and space
    and over thoughts and desire
    I see the blood flow
    in your veins like rivers.

    My breath tastes your scent
    and my passion explodes
    at your proud beauty
    enchanting with every look
    and calling from lands
    deep hidden in mysteries.

    Yet i desire
    to tame your flames
    clinging on your fleshs' rhythm
    moulded into one
    manifesting my will
    yet you flee before dawn.




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