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Author:	LadyChaos
ASL Info:	19/F/DE
Elite Ratio:	3.42 - 718/606/95
Words:	120

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	582
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	699

Description:
random tribute to one of my favorite bands...make of it what you will

Tribute

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You're Half the Man you Used to Be
And I drain you of All Apologies
School is just a Dumb Swap Meet
So you sip your Pennyroyal Tea

I Hate Myself and Want to Die
Send me to the Lake of Fire to fry
Rape Me till I start to cry
Sifting my soul, till its done and dry

Give a Sliver to The Man Who Sold the World
And Paper Cuts to Polly
She's In Bloom:
Tell her to Come As she Is
Or as you want her to be

Give your regards to Marigold
Your Endless, Nameless Love Buzz
Who Smells like Teen Spirit
and Stays Away On A Plain
Because Somethings in the Way.

Submitted on 2004-04-03 03:08:46 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This poem has a great beat. You stayed focuse and kept a steady stream. keep up the good work. I think you're an excellent poet.
| Posted on 2004-04-04 00:00:00 | by Shintotori | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm guessing you like Nirvana ? At least that's what I recognize. That's cool. It's a good combination of random lyrics. I like how it sounds.
| Posted on 2004-04-04 00:00:00 | by Aj | [ Reply to This ]
  cool tribute fix the type o in the first line, yo should be to i guess, sorry for getting behind reading your stuff, you r one of my favorites it is just this site is so full of submissions, my appologies if you feel neglected
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]
  good tribute, you gave me an idea to write a tribute to one of my favorite band, thanks for the idea, oh and great way of putting song titles into the poem, great write!
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it too. It's in the same vein as Kafka Dreams. However, the song is called "Sliver," not "Silver."
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
  i really liked that one. nice. I should listen more to Nirvana again. haven't done it for a while.
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ummm...I didn't quite get this. Which band are you talking about? A lot of the rhymes you have used seem very forced and the poem just doesn't seem to make any sense to me. Sorry.
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by selfbetrayal | [ Reply to This ]
  I like. In fact I had the same idea except using band names instead of song names. My only complaint is that u confuse the issue by switching from Nirvana every so often.
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]

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