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    dots Submission Name: Awe; Na;turELLEdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 142



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       Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsAwe; Na;turELLEdots
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    So confident inmy throft-store masterpiece
    awash with beads
    Geisha girl a'walkin
    haiku
    God Bless You!




    Submitted on 2005-04-13 00:28:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Awww..I been to plenty of THROFT shops...they're all the rage down here in Texus...
    he.
    he.
    Geisha Gerl A'walkin...
    Were'nt that a Hank Williams Jr. Sowng?
    We'll if it ain't...it shoulda been!
    Later Piffernater...
    D.A.T.
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by Deep Ace Thinks | [ Reply to This ]
      When I read this haiku I think of a young Japanese country girl a long time ago. Polishing something for sale in a store in hopes of meeting a young handsome Japanese man.
    Like the last person who commented it is indeed very sweet.
    Arrowcat
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by Arrowcat | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwwww...you are giving me a tooth ache because you are sooo sweet. But since I gotta show face I will point out that there is a misspellyng in here. But I wont point it out after drinking a pint...because I am sure the sober YOU will spend at least 8 minutes searching for it in the morning. Well, you are a pretty smart whipper snapper that you will probably find it in 60...no...dare I say...45...DAMN IT! 8...seconds...
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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