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    dots Submission Name: random letterdots

    Author: Patricio
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 31/33/7
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       i wrote this when i was like 11 or 12 but i still think its kinda funny i could make it better but i thought it better to keep it as close to the original as memmory allowed

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    This is a letter to a random reader
    Yes a random reader itís true
    But now random reader its directed strait at you

    Your butt is big
    You eat like a pig
    Your feet are smelly
    your face is too
    Be careful who you give this to
    They will be offended just like you
    Your poems all reek
    You look like a freak
    Your teeth are green
    Iím not being mean,
    Iím just stating what is true
    So if youíre reading this aloud
    In front of a crowd
    Theyíre all going to laugh at you

    Submitted on 2005-04-13 02:46:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it was pretty funny yeah mostly in a very honest sort of way you know? its not like laugh at loud hilarous but good in its way
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Hugh Jass | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats funny i liked the beginning of it a lot more than the rest but thats a good poem and at the same time funny and just relaxed.
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by Marisa | [ Reply to This ]
      Love it! SO funny! my brother has GOT to read this! stupid little box thing... this is good for an eleven or twelve year old...
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL, I laughed so hard at this. kool? What kind of person uses kool now? j/k Great job at this, I have to print it off and give it to my sister now...
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]

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