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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       my boyfriend the guy i love more then anything
    dumped me 4-7-05 and for the past year everything i've done has been with him so now i dont know what to do plz help me come up with a title!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsuntitleddots
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    as your mind spins
    tears of confusion raises over me
    love so deep,
    love so thin,
    our love so close to the end.
    memories of good times cloud my mind
    memories of you stop my time
    yet memories you leaving me
    for forever will be left confusing my mind...




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