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    dots Submission Name: left one love blinddots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 989
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    Bytes: 551



    Description:
       i feel so confused i miss my ex but im also happy so i can get my life back togeather so i dont have ot depend on him but i can also onlythink of how much i love him and miss him and all the fun we had togeather sooo plz comment on this


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    dotsleft one love blinddots
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    "left one love blind"
    I didnt know you felt like you do,
    how could i be so blind
    how could i not see this
    coming from you
    you left just like that not
    even wondering about coming back
    you broke my heart but it's happended
    before,
    but this time i've learned how to shut the door
    everything happened so fast
    i really miss you,
    i really want you back,
    you left me blind heart to see
    but this broken love will not
    take over me...




    Submitted on 2005-04-13 18:18:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm proud of this write, I myself went through anger management for a girl just to find out she didn't want me any more, in my opinion don't change yourself just move on.
    | Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by noone important | [ Reply to This ]


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