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    dots Submission Name: A Matter of Principledots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Matter of Principledots
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    On a matter of principle
    she never drew straight lines
    or perfect circles.
    As a child, she only colored
    outside of the lines.
    She abhored anything correct,
    anything traditionally pretty.
    She created a new type of beauty
    making flaws the new hallmarks of correctness.
    Now to anyone who sees her paintings,
    the pieces of her world
    the old beauty is trite and naive.





    Submitted on 2004-04-03 09:52:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      She had Imagination---and used it, and sometimes that takes a lot of guts. I like this for shwoing that.Silver
    | Posted on 2004-04-04 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that the story drawn in the poem could have been set up differently, maybe if you switched lines in the piece, I found it was missing something as well. Not the best I've seen today, but I think the story behind it was good, nobodys perfect, and some like to live by their own rules, its what our society thrives on these days, our own unique qualities.
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      They say that the more perfect the circle you can draw, the closer you are to madness.
    This is joyously unrepentantly in the corner of odd circles...
    In the praise of who?
    Doesn't matter mind: it reads really very well.
    K
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh wow, I really liked this.... It showed (me, at least) that we should not be afraid to make mistakes, because they are what shape us into the beautiful things we may become...Really beautifully put...
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]


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