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    dots Submission Name: A distant friendshipdots
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    Author: musclebound350
    ASL Info:    26/male
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 197/202/70
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 850
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 601



    Description:
       uhm. Just whats going on with me here. Feel free to comment on anything.


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    dotsA distant friendshipdots
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    We write to express
    to share and progress

    We open up to everyone with words
    hopefully our voice will now be heard

    With poetry my feelings I share
    Hoping someone is out there that cares

    With a dozen of posts and comments
    A small friendship is started

    I now socialize with some
    now I'm not feeling as alone

    Why must I make distant friends
    I hope this will never end

    With emotions aside I have nothing left
    hard to explain thought's I cant express




    Submitted on 2005-04-13 20:53:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting.

    "With a dozen of posts and comments
    A small friendship is started

    I now socialize with some
    now I'm not feeling as alone"

    It's true on here, post a bit and comment and slowly you get to know someone by their work and how they feel. A true passion for writing. You truly are that of a unique one. Keep it up!

    "The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon."
    ~ Robert Cromier

    †Bree†
    | Posted on 2005-05-22 00:00:00 | by Destined | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this is, yet again, a great piece. You are very talented. I dont know..i havent made many friends on here..and it feels that the ones I have, are now slipping away. You are a great writer..dont ever give it up..
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by longwinterdays | [ Reply to This ]


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