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    dots Submission Name: The TruThdots
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    Author: PookiezBookie
    ASL Info:    16/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    4.4 - 103/129/49
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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       thoughts that i have just realized are oh so true about love.


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    dotsThe TruThdots
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    If you're willing to put everything you have on the line for the name of love, why is it that someway, some how, something, somewhere, gets messed up? I have spent most of my life wishing that the one person that I could fine would realize what a find they had too. If you know that you and the person you love are supposed to be together forever and are meant for each other, why is nature always against you? Everybody makes the mistakes in love because, dispite what people say, no one is perfect. It is admitting those mistakes and flaws and moving on with you relationship so that your love can grow into something irresistable and unstoppable. Some people will be together for a day and some a week, some even a year. But true love, is having the love last for a lifetime. Heartaches are shoved in there and lies are twisted up in the mix. But the ones that make it through are the ones that deserve that love. Find this person, and keep him/her. Because the saying is true, you never know what you have until it's gone. So realize what you have and praise it everyday, for when it is gone, you will mourn the loss of that never ending love, that has just seemed to end.




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      Now you know i feel this one, I guess we'll never really know why. I've put so much on the line that theres no way how she could leave me, but they alwas do, I guess some just don't know what love is or how to deal with it, some are just scared of it and that will haunt the rest of us forever.
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by jermwerm | [ Reply to This ]


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