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    dots Submission Name: I Bleed Beautydots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I guess this is a lot like My Pen.

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    dotsI Bleed Beautydots

    I bleed beauty,
    collect it,
    and smear it on paper
    for you to decipher.

    Submitted on 2004-04-03 11:15:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this. I think I'm going to add it to my favorites. It's kind of leaves whoever collects the beauty hanging because it's like "hey you can have some of it but I'm not going to tell you about it."
    | Posted on 2004-04-11 00:00:00 | by spitacidsoot | [ Reply to This ]
      cool very short yet you have managed to capture the essence of a writer/poet in just a few lines beautiful
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by whyme | [ Reply to This ]
      To use so few words and evoke so much in imagery and feeling is truly a gift and in looking over a number of your pieces i see this reiterated again and again!
    | Posted on 2004-04-05 00:00:00 | by Transcendancing | [ Reply to This ]
      Magnificent!!!! In so few words, what a beautiful (and true) thought!! Keep this up!
    | Posted on 2004-04-04 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
      short but great. Yes it is like your pen...if your pen is so beautiful like you.
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like your word choise here. it's great. sweet little four lines. i like it.
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot, dumplin. you know i like the short ones! very descriptive in a very short poem. brava!! beautiful! and i agree!
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely, the way you always are. You really see to the heart of everything, don't you? The raw, beating heart?

    ~ Nihredil
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]

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