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Submission Name: Forbidden love dots

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Author:	sweet-fire
ASL Info:	21/f/ky
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 296/279/42
Words:	167

Class/Type:	Misc/Longing
Total Views:	267
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i know this is a little hard to keep up with but its a true story about myself and im having a hard time with it. i just thought id share it with everyone...someone else may very well be going through the same thing...

Forbidden love dots

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Bound by a love
That I never had.
I have my soul mate.
For which I am glad.
There’s something familiar,
About this other guy.
He’s awakened my senses,
And opened my eyes.
I can’t seem to get him
Off of my mind.
He’s totally sweet-
And cutely unkind.
One day I meet him-
Im with my man.
I hold in my smile
As much as I can.
The tension is heavy,
As their eyes lock.
While deep in my chest,
My heart begins to knock.
I see him again…
He wants me bad.
My conscience gets me.
He looks so sad.
Our love is forbidden,
But I can’t stay away.
He’s in my mind,
This very day.
Ill never leave
The love of my life.
Someday soon,
Ill be his wife.
All I want is
One lone night.
But that could cause
Loss of my sight.
Our love is forbidden.
So ill stay away.
But he’ll be in my mind
Probably, everyday.

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  I can only think of one word to describe this, well maybe two. Intense and heartbreaking. I really feel for you, being put in that situation and all, I know it can't be easy. Anyways, I enjoyed reading this poem and think that you did a wonderful job at expressing your feelings and in writing this. Keep it up.
~*~Brandie~*~
| Posted on 2006-01-28 00:00:00 | by Flaming_Shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a very good poem. Very complex situation you have described here and I can relate to it. I think we all can at some point in our lives. It made me question my relationship though, and made me wonder if my boyfriend was really the one. I thought that I shouldnt have these feelings for someone else if it was true love...well, to make a long story short, I remained faithful, but we ended up breaking up anyway. Hopefully you have done some soul searching to make sure you know how you really feel. You talk of getting married and I hope you are positive that it is the right decision before you make it. A good poem. Take care.

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  well i have to say that i have had that same problem. expecial when things get hard in my marrage i think well this outher guy would be a loght better for me and my happyness but i have a child and love my husband despite what an ass he can be sometimes. well great write i totally understood. lia
| Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
  I was in the same kind of situation a year ago. It took me a long time to make the decision that I did (2 years in fact).

I was married, and in love with his best friend. My husband's friend was also deeply in love with me. However, the one that was best for me was the best friend. At the time my husband had me addicted to Meth, and partying all the time.

THe best friend wanted to settle down and have a family, and my husband could not have kids, so my husband didn't care about settling down.

I eventually left my husband after he beat me severely. I got together with the best friend and am now 6 months pregnant (a girl). I am glad that I chose what I did. The hardest thing was kicking the meth addiction.

I hope that you have made a decision that makes you happy. I know I did.

Keep up the great work. BTW, I loved the poem, it was great.

Unicorn
| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by Unicorn Poet | [ Reply to This ]
  OMG I AM GOING THROUGH THE SAME EXACT THING...I CANT BELIEVE IT! i just told the other guy that likes me...(but i have a boyfriend) that it was just infatuation and that he doesnt really liek me and he only wants me because he cant have me...But i know it isnt true and i really like him alot but i know that the guy im with will be better for me in the long run...i still dont know what to do and i hope you can solve your problems...just wanted you to know that you are not on the boat alone...lol Anyways really great write i dont see why you dont think it is that good...the one i wrote to explain how i feeel is Internal Arguements if you want to read it...It probably wont help though...Great job keep it up
RandiKae
| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by RandiKae | [ Reply to This ]
  Girl, I know what you talkin ABOUT! That is serious too. It almost makes you question your love for the person you are with to have these uncontrollable feelings towards a complete stranger. STAY AWAY GIRL...STAY AWAY! LOL

Stay with what you know and depend on. It's not worth the regret.

Great write. Don't change a thing!

Li Li
| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  I can relate, and if you think that you are happy with who you have choose then you should try to stay away from the other or just walk out of the room when he is around. It might seem drastic, but just think of it on the flip side..would you want your man doing that to you?
I have had the same feelings for another, but he could never be the one for me..or even begin to match up to the one I love. Even though there are certian things about him that make my heart drop to my knees, in time he too would also become familiar and there would be another in the"other mans" place. I hope this was helpful, I enjoyed your poetry and meaningful words.
Thanks
Denise
| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  This almost sounds like my story. When I met my best friend, she was dating this guy and was "so in love". But the feelings you have placed in this piece are the same feelings that she had for nearly two years now. Finally, she and I have decided to be with each other following our break ups from the so called loves of our lives. Hey you never know. Anyway, great write on what many people experience and are afraid to say.

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| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
  see should be seem...

Aww...love or lust or infatuation? I never knew it was so bad...Im sorry. I dont know what to tell you. Is it bad that I take you to see him? Or is it good cause you want to? What if Steven finds out? What then? I dont think he would break up with you...just look at what he has done to you before. But thats not the point, I guess. I just dont know what to tell you. I just thought it was cool that you act the way you do when you see Jay...cause im not there when you see steven...and when you see Jay, Im usually there with Zane and you are feeling the exact same thing I am...I dunno, felt kinda weird...but good. Like we were going through the same thing together...ok...ive said too much...but oh well...

->Dark
| Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]

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