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    dots Submission Name: I.C.Y.dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 688
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 549



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       Love, Peace, Joy and playing hooky from work! he he he
    I'm going fishing ; > }

    Quote of the day from Emerson, "I cannot consent to pay for a privilege where I have intrinsic right."

    Great 1 2 All!
    Epiphany ; > }


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    dotsI.C.Y.dots
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    <@> see why
    Truly "NOW"
    never stops
    in
    "ITZ"
    Infinite Forever....
    i
    y.
    Wisdom
    is the
    "echo"
    of past ; > }
    Eye C Why
    Knowledge, experience,
    Faith & Virtue
    "R"
    Life Revealed!.!
    I see why
    the FUTURE
    is but a picture
    of a
    mirror
    picturing
    a
    mirror.........................................<@> . C. ?~




    Submitted on 2005-04-14 13:05:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "NOW"
    never stops
    in
    "ITZ"
    Infinite Forever

    Yes, my dear true words that are seldom spoken or understood...like it alot. You can dream about the future...but you live in the NOW...so take care of the NOW because it will enhance the future. Man...you are so awesome. Way to put it into words and your format kicks a$$! OH...better make a standard comment heee-ah!

    "There were a lot of misspellyngs...you might want to revise it so that it follows the modern english language that we have all been enslaved in."

    O.K. Have a great one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      You said a wonderful thing in here, Tiff:
    NOW NEVER STOPS
    I like your descriptions a lot, and eye C U R crazy! Stay that way!
    Fishing? Sounds like a good excuse to down a few!

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      If i could understand the meaning of this poem it would probably be much greater than it already is...As smily said the only part i can relate to is I see why the Future is but a picture of a mirror picturing a mirror... I would really like to know what kind of writing this is though...You never stop to amaze me i have read alot of your stuff and it is all great...No complaints..Very original...Great Imagination
    RandiKae
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by RandiKae | [ Reply to This ]
      What is this pattern/style of writing called? It certainly is nobel to me, and quite strange too.
    About the write, I could only relate with this:

    I see why
    the FUTURE
    is but a picture
    of a
    mirror
    picturing
    a
    mirror

    Yep! the future is blank alright. Why? Well, I believe God made it so that we can determine how our future is going to look like, but do we ever???
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by smily | [ Reply to This ]


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