Oooh my this is such an influential piece...I needed to hear something this deep, this has been crafted with such precision, for it just spoke to my SOUL...its so INCREDIBLE...Its well said and so INSPIRING...I loved this piece...I really ENJOYED reading this one...Its just PHENOMENAL...It blessed my HEART...Thank you!Nobantu
this is a beautiful poem! a great expression of such a powerful emotion and feeling! I really liked the good and bad theme of it all and agree with you! lots of people claim they love someone only to find that when troubles arise they are gone. Finding that someone is a gift all in itself! Nice job! Take care!
Pretty much grasped the whole love concept here! the way you write about love here gives me the image that love is a kind of gurardian angel, always around and keeping your spirits up. its a possitive attitude that love never goes away and also reflects that love will always take over (in a good way) which is true ! - like the rhythm - flowed really well xxxx great xx xxCallyxx
see, this is the x i like. the happy, lovey dovey x! i'm so happy for you, it makes me smile just reading the titles of your poems (and then the actual poem). i'm so glad things are going well for you... (it's not better than mine though lol) just kiddin, love ya.
Wow! I wish I could get my man to see love this way. He seems to think that it's all about sex and staying together no matter what. Even when a disagreement comes up, he ignores it, because "if we fight, then we don't love each other."
You have such great insight to so many things. I can relate to so many of the things that you write about, it's a nice change to some of the other things you read about.
I appreciate your work greatly and look forward to reading more... Keep up the great work, and I'll be reading more later.
This was put in a beautiful way. I really liked it. I especially liked the second to last stanza. You did a wonderful job definning love and what it is all about. To me it had a good rythme. It was kind of catchy.
I also really like the second stanza. I really liked it lots. Keep on writing.
Yay, I guess you're still in love! All very nicely put, my man, you can't have too much love! Next time you drop in, have a look at my "You Are" the two poems compliment each other well. Well done, Be Happy Graeme
wow great job it is kinda of ironic because i submitted a poem called Internal Arugements...I think you commented.. And it ttalked about not knowing wether to go for love or not..of course i dont believe in lovve at 16 but this poem really expressed what it is...Im glad that you wrote it because it feels like God answered my prayers...and it isnt really that i dont want love just that i dont think i am ready for it.. Thanks for the poem..Keep writting RandiKae
This was very elegant. You broke it down boy! You always seem to come out of the blue with the most sincere pieces. It allows us to know that when you have to get tough, you can, yet you are still a sensitive man. And that amazes me that you can fully fulfill both rolls.