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    dots Submission Name: confused mind....dots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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       my boyfriend dumped me 4-7-05 i dont know what to do w/out him plz comment


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    dotsconfused mind....dots
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    as your mind spins
    tears of confusion raises over me
    love so deep,
    love so thin,
    our love so close to the end.
    memories of good times cloud my mind
    memories of you stop my time
    yet memories you leaving me
    for forever will be left confusing my mind...





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